tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10662018.post111265390159003688..comments2023-10-18T02:17:00.526-06:00Comments on Undiscovered Poetry: magnetic poemAdrian Neibauerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07141883534073122903noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10662018.post-1112802308640360512005-04-06T09:45:00.000-06:002005-04-06T09:45:00.000-06:00"Do you stay because you are afraid to leave,or le..."Do you stay because you are afraid to leave,<BR/>or leave because you fear staying behind?"<BR/><BR/>I agree with A. These lines caught my attention, and made me question the reasons I feel stuck in some dreams. You have a way of seeing inside her soul. Wow!mermaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15895749686844178804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10662018.post-1112800061010262022005-04-06T09:07:00.000-06:002005-04-06T09:07:00.000-06:00I really like the way you have presented the optio...I really like the way you have presented the options in this one,<BR/><BR/>"Do you escape the wake?<BR/>Do you visit the familiar?<BR/>Do you stay because you are afraid to leave,<BR/>or leave because you fear staying behind?"<BR/><BR/>Also really liked, "When you dream, do you hear the colors in your mind?". For the same reason as Pincushion talks about in her comment.. : A : .https://www.blogger.com/profile/04410256917258728976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10662018.post-1112729209752054662005-04-05T13:26:00.000-06:002005-04-05T13:26:00.000-06:00adrian, of all the poems i've read here... for me,...adrian, of all the poems i've read here... for me, this takes the throne.<BR/><BR/>these two lines...<BR/><BR/><I>I love in whispers,<BR/>languid and delirious</I><BR/><BR/>...they burn in my mind.S.L. Corsuahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10299376651709536034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10662018.post-1112704265805812972005-04-05T06:31:00.000-06:002005-04-05T06:31:00.000-06:00'When you dream, do you hear the colors in your mi...'When you dream, do you hear the colors in your mind?'<BR/><BR/>What a beautiful thought! Such abstract an emotion caught so beautifully and in such simple words! <BR/>This poem brings to my mind the words..'simplicity is the essence of beauty'<BR/>:)Pincushionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14064798658006886544noreply@blogger.com