tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10662018.post111767924695927975..comments2023-10-18T02:17:00.526-06:00Comments on Undiscovered Poetry: cold, bitterest of coldsAdrian Neibauerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07141883534073122903noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10662018.post-1117885933914816512005-06-04T05:52:00.000-06:002005-06-04T05:52:00.000-06:00hi...just discovered your blog...loved the stuff y...hi...just discovered your blog...loved the stuff you've written...really fabulous I think...Cheers!<BR/><BR/>by the way, would you mind reading and commenting on some of my undiscovered poems at<BR/><BR/>http://shubhodeep.blog-city.comShubhodeephttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14531807048596430649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10662018.post-1117806007744588652005-06-03T07:40:00.000-06:002005-06-03T07:40:00.000-06:00When I read the music I fell in love with music th...When I read the music I fell in love with music that I heard trhough your poem...when I read cold, bitterest of colds <BR/>Your poem sent me a bit of that cold to my land where it feel that we are burning in fireiamnasrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16030794699915000249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10662018.post-1117793125686591262005-06-03T04:05:00.000-06:002005-06-03T04:05:00.000-06:00'I stand outside the warmth of everyoneand wait.'T...'I stand outside the warmth of everyone<BR/>and wait.'<BR/>This line jumped out at me..sad, soulful and in solitude..but..like Trans here..I liked the gradual climax to hope :)<BR/><BR/>Have a great weekend!Pincushionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14064798658006886544noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10662018.post-1117768865874846612005-06-02T21:21:00.000-06:002005-06-02T21:21:00.000-06:00it seems melancholy at the onset, but it actually ...it seems melancholy at the onset, but it actually ends on a hopeful note. well done!{illyria}https://www.blogger.com/profile/11333497030751042143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10662018.post-1117768361022129052005-06-02T21:12:00.000-06:002005-06-02T21:12:00.000-06:00I can read a lot of personal stuff into that - mus...I can read a lot of personal stuff into that - must just be the haunting undertone.<BR/><BR/>Nice one.TwistedNogginhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13017351118631099044noreply@blogger.com