It sits
untouched
by time and by my father,
waiting for her return.
I would not say
unkept,
but still neglected
and unfinished;
still waiting.
Unfinished projects
frozen:
half-painted walls,
half-fixed fences,
half-healed hearts.
Passerbys
do not notice
(if they stop at all)
the stiff
architecture;
the stagnate
air
lingering within.
The house
is her
and she
is dead;
yet remains
untouched
waiting for her return.
Thursday, March 31, 2005
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3 comments:
Hi Stan Laurel! Nice poetry! Does Hardy write too?
Is that an anonymous moniker?
Thanks for stopping by my site and leaving some comments. They are much appreciated.
I like this piece. It has this narrative, haunting quality to it. Rather natural.
Best wishes . . . .
This is sad and poignant.
I liked one expression used here immensely -"half-healed hearts"..
beautifully portrayed
:)
you know me, adrian. i got a soft spot for a bittersweet slice of morbidity, buttered with loss. that phrase, "half-healed hearts"... *sigh* jyotsna beat me to praising that line. ^_^
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