Thursday, September 22, 2005

young

They were young
to the world.
Only she would compose
her vivid dreams.
Soon, he was like
her silhouette:
black,
suffering,
surreal.

10 comments:

Shubhodeep said...

simple and stunning!

well written!

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Shubhodeep said...

simple and stunning!

well written!

btw, i'm finally back!

check out at shubhodeep.blogspot.com

cheers!

. : A : . said...

"her silhouette:
black,
suffering,
surreal."

Good alliteration.

Anonymous Poet said...

Interesting coincidence. My latest piece is about a silhouette, too.

gulnaz said...

suffering does seem to become surreal when it goes beyong a point. excellent observation!!!

gulnaz said...

suffering does seem to become surreal when it goes beyong a point. excellent observation!!!

:..M..: said...

Oh my. That was..it took my breath away.

. : A : . said...

Btw, Happy Birthday.

Sue hardy-Dawson said...

I like this though it sugests painful emotions, short but intense

Pincushion said...

'Soon, he was like
her silhouette:
black,
suffering,
surreal...'

Painful and starkly beautiful!