Wednesday, July 05, 2006

poetry pains

we pierced those laughs
with warm throbs of worry
looking for something,
to say.

Your poetry growls:
a wild belly hungry for words,
yet when the window opens,
they float out
to the night sky
in translucent smoke.


iamnasra said...

been awhile since I visited your blog..with work and studying spanish Im upto my ears ...

stan laurel said...

good to have you back!

mermaid said...

Sometimes it's hard to capture what is going on inside, but I think you've got it here.

Pincushion said...

YOu eloquently express the inexpressible!

Liam Wilkinson said...

Cor Blimey! A couple of little stunners. These two poems are really, really wonderful. Thank you.

"Warm throbs of worry"

...what a fantastic image!

:..M..: said...

Like how you say 'pierced those laughs'.

N. said...

Beautiful... I can so relate to it