Friday, March 24, 2017

Solemn Aspirations

solemn aspirations
dwell: statues
in thought.
The light is found
preserved
from centuries of
hate
patiently seeking
the meaning.

1 comment:

Adrian Neibauer, EdD said...

As you can see, I am experimenting with a few different things: line breaks, punctuation, imagery, and allusion). Do any of these work? What do you think? Do I need to develop any of these images more? Let me know your thoughts. Thanks!