Monday, October 03, 2005

small verses

small verses

fill bits of emptiness.
furious petals

become natural drops
This will
emulate my stillness.

10 comments:

Sue hardy-Dawson said...

love the way this is laid out, it slows it down beautifully

jagannath rao said...

The lines are very beautiful

. : A : . said...

Very interesting technique. Every line lingers.

gulnaz said...

there is such a sense of symmetry to this...a lingering beauty

Sue hardy-Dawson said...

To be still like petals, and fill spaces with small verses. lovely

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Anonymous Poet said...

furious stillness . . . interesting.

Rare Blue said...

I loved this poem.

Brevity.

Beauty.

G.

Anonymous Poet said...

An impressionistic, still moment. Well captured.

iamnasra said...

I loved reading this poem