A place for my undiscovered poems, thoughts, and pearls of wisdom.
love the way this is laid out, it slows it down beautifully
The lines are very beautiful
Very interesting technique. Every line lingers.
there is such a sense of symmetry to this...a lingering beauty
To be still like petals, and fill spaces with small verses. lovely
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furious stillness . . . interesting.
I loved this poem. Brevity.Beauty.G.
An impressionistic, still moment. Well captured.
I loved reading this poem
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