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I smelled this one from way over here. I Am the suffering "he" of her silhouetted dreams.My life is now a very fine mess.
simple and stunning!well written!btw, i'm finally back!check out at shubhodeep.blogspot.comcheers!
"her silhouette:black,suffering,surreal."Good alliteration.
Interesting coincidence. My latest piece is about a silhouette, too.
suffering does seem to become surreal when it goes beyong a point. excellent observation!!!
Oh my. That was..it took my breath away.
Btw, Happy Birthday.
I like this though it sugests painful emotions, short but intense
'Soon, he was likeher silhouette:black,suffering,surreal...'Painful and starkly beautiful!
This stirred up so much pain inside me.You are wonderful with your words.
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