Thursday, September 01, 2005

translucent

You were translucent,
yet once the
magic embraced
my universe,
this smoke
here
lingered.

You must listen,
perhaps
for an eternity.

5 comments:

. : A : . said...

Now, as I read this and the previous poem. It reads like one continous poem from the top of the blog. Intentional?

Lovely.

gulnaz said...

You must listen,
perhaps
for an eternity.

this reads like a talisman!

beautiful poem!

iamnasra said...

and what hear is this poem recited once again

You must listen,
perhaps
for an eternity

Anonymous Poet said...

Ethereal, suggestive. As infinite as the cosmos.

Whatever that lingering smoke is, I'll have some of that.

shyloh said...

UMMM me too, some smoke please. Sounds so so
yes it does haha. I like this one.