Saturday, September 17, 2005

Who questions
the blue, night voice,
brilliant
in my sky?
Listen, perhaps you
think I bring
secret poetry,
but I blush
and walk away.

7 comments:

Sue hardy-Dawson said...

Hi there, thanks for visiting with such kind words. I work in secondary school (like your high school, though I do teach poetry workshops in lessons, technically speaking I support children with special needs. You have some lovely poems here, I will be back to read more of them when I get time. Call by anytime

Pincushion said...

Such a delicate verse and such vivid imagery!
Love it!
:)

_Soulless_ said...

One of my favorites here, this certainly is. ^_^ Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful.

Jyotsna said...

tentative with a hint of shyness or humility perhaps..few words encapsulate so much dont they?

iamnasra said...

WHen I visit you Im amazed with your poteic touches

Anonymous Poet said...

"the blue, night voice" . . .nice image, and "secret poetry," too.

yvaine said...

this is so beautiful! such shyness and beauty.