A place for my undiscovered poems, thoughts, and pearls of wisdom.
I like your simplicity that speaks volumes. We can sometimes only attain clarity after the smoke clears and we seek to grasp that which we seek with mental tendrils.
Interesting stream-of-conscience narrative.Is "free of smoke" literal? Or figurative? I tend to lean toward figurative when I read this piece.The last two lines are a prayer to yourself?
I laugh ofwhat life is,as I move acrossthe room.it seems that you moved across a lifetime there and not just across the room.
wow, maybe i do understand what you were thinking..
these are the line which i loved I laugh ofwhat life is,as I move acrossthe room.
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