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I like your simplicity that speaks volumes. We can sometimes only attain clarity after the smoke clears and we seek to grasp that which we seek with mental tendrils.
Interesting stream-of-conscience narrative.Is "free of smoke" literal? Or figurative? I tend to lean toward figurative when I read this piece.The last two lines are a prayer to yourself?
I laugh ofwhat life is,as I move acrossthe room.it seems that you moved across a lifetime there and not just across the room.
wow, maybe i do understand what you were thinking..
Epiphany!
these are the line which i loved I laugh ofwhat life is,as I move acrossthe room.
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I like your simplicity that speaks volumes.
We can sometimes only attain clarity after the smoke clears and we seek to grasp that which we seek with mental tendrils.
Interesting stream-of-conscience narrative.
Is "free of smoke" literal? Or figurative? I tend to lean toward figurative when I read this piece.
The last two lines are a prayer to yourself?
I laugh of
what life is,
as I move across
the room.
it seems that you moved across a lifetime there and not just across the room.
wow, maybe i do understand what you were thinking..
Epiphany!
these are the line which i loved
I laugh of
what life is,
as I move across
the room.
these are the line which i loved
I laugh of
what life is,
as I move across
the room.
these are the line which i loved
I laugh of
what life is,
as I move across
the room.
Post a Comment