Thursday, July 14, 2005

On a particular
cloud,
each tingling
desire
floats
to heaven.

You'll interfere!
Touch no other
moon.
Look elsewhere.

5 comments:

iamnasra said...

you words linger into my soul..it recites again into me

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us

Anonymous said...

there is something of a butter fly in this one. liked it 4 that.

about your comment at nasra's latest post- 'hugs'

gulnaz

yvaine said...

how nice! makes me want to ponder on my daydreams.

Liam Wilkinson said...

So subtle but really powerful - I wish I could pull off one word lines as well as you do.

Haunting! Thanks!

Anonymous Poet said...

I wont interfere! Promise! I love the first stanza, so much!

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